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[Nick]

Bad hobbit. No shooting at people!

[Frodo]

Bah, spoilsport.  


Typo?  

Spoiler

"Have an ID? This is a restricted area."

Should it be
"Have any ID? This is a restricted area."

[Nick]

Technically, we use that phrase in the US. It's like gangster slang!

[Frodo]

Ah, Americansim.  

How about this one?  

Spoiler

Everyone nodes their head at you. Once again, the man speaks.

EDIT:  Typo?

Spoiler

"Remember the woman lying in your bed?.. Well that was your wife. Tisk tisk.. it's so sad you flipped out. Lost your sanity.. killed your wife. No one wanted you.. so instead of being sentinced to life inside the walls of a rehab hospital, we took you.. gave you a job. A mission.. but you failed it. You failed us. So now we have no choice.

Should it be
so instead of being sentenced to life inside

[Nick]

Thanks for noticing. I'll have to fix them That's what happens when you make a game in 2 days.

[Frodo]

Hey, I'm impressed that you finished it in only 2 days.  Brownie points to you.  

[Nick]

Hehe, I like to challenge myself. Make something with high replay value, but make it quickly.

[Frodo]

*cough*  

Spoiler

"I've brought you our new recruit. Meet Agent Franco."

Everyone nodes their head at you. The man, who appears to be the boss.. starts talking.

[Nick]

I'll fix all of these typos eventually. Before it goes on Choice of Games.

At least there aren't any errors so far.

[Frodo]

Nope, can't find any bugs yet.  

[Nick]

I'll gather all the typos, fix them, and update to version 1.2 before submitting to Choice of Games.

[Nick]

I've went through the scripts, and updated each typo you mentioned.

I'll include the updated files in the next version.

Thanks for reporting them. And be sure to report any more you find.

EDIT: Version 1.2 online. Play on the website, or download with the new link.

Play online
Download (Less than 1 MB)

EDIT #2: I've also submitted the fixed version to Choice of Games.

[Nick]

I received a reply from Choice of Games. They are going to review my game, and likely add it to their site soon.

First I have to sign a contract with them, then the game will go live on their site.

[Frodo]

That's brilliant news about your game, Nick.    

Be careful of what you sign, though.  Read it all carefully,first.  

[Nick]

I'm going to. I assume it's some kind of digital signature. I'll look into it with them.