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[quote name='A. J. Raffles' timestamp='1148840977' post='31278'] Ah. Well, in that case you might want to go steer away from that 19th-century fondness of long words and go for a slightly simpler style. No offence, but at the moment it reads too much like a text written either by someone trying to imitate Wodehouse or by a precocious teenager trying to show off all the big words he knows... That sort of thing can be fun if you do it every now and then, but it's a bit tedious to read an entire short story written that way, because it actually distracts from the text. Besides, the style seems highly artificial - I don't really think that's [i]you[/i], to be honest...:ok: [/quote]
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