With the Abandonia Grammar Squad inactive until Raffles resurfaces, I've got to get my nitpicking fix elsewhere, so...
All of the following are from the
Frederik Pohl's Gateway review:
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In the year 2077 hummankind discovers a stash
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which basically makes it ddifferent from most other text adventures in two ways
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Wether you want to type or click your way through the game is up to you
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but the graphics really nothing more than images of the location you're currantly at
Also in that last one, something ("are," perhaps) seems to be missing after the word "graphics."
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while the optimists will say that the they're actually quite impressive
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sound tracks that make you want to reach volume knob
I'm thinking there should be a "for the" in there somewhere.
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one thing that makes it stand out as classic among adventure games; it's puzzles.
No apostrophe is necessary in the possessive "its." Also, that semicolon should be a full-on colon.
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You have to pay close attention, though, you never know what bit of information could prove usefull later on.
Also, I think there should be a "since" or an "as" or even a "because" before "you never know."