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Frodo

Posted 28 June 2007 - 05:21 PM

View PostQbix, on Jun 28 2007, 09:05 AM, said:

in the prince of persia review there are lot of weird characters like the euro sign and the trademark sign.

Fixed.  Thanks for noticing.   :shrug:

Qbix

Posted 28 June 2007 - 08:05 AM

in the prince of persia review there are lot of weird characters like the euro sign and the trademark sign.

DeathDude

Posted 14 September 2006 - 05:58 PM

Probably lost my train of thought, ah wells fixed. :(

greywolf

Posted 14 September 2006 - 04:06 PM

In the new review Willy's Miner Nightmare, the last part of this is somewhat strange:

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That is right, Willy is a superior jumper and using his jumping skills, he can avoid enemies, and ha that will show those annoying enemies.

I think DD forgot to finish part of the sentence. :(

DeathDude

Posted 13 September 2006 - 07:50 PM

Fixed. :(

PrejudiceSucks

Posted 13 September 2006 - 07:42 PM

Saboteur95 - Even the main character(who’s appereance you can modify) is borrowed from old Mortal Kombat games.

It should be 'whose'.

Juni Ori

Posted 06 July 2006 - 02:51 PM

Ahem. DD and his grammar! :P

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You have your lasers and your proton torpedoes and of course, you are flying skills as well.
Star Wars: Battle of Endor. Btw, there's a revealing clue that DD never got to see Super Star Destryoer, as he mentions only:

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Flying in game as you face down the many enemies from the tie fighters, to the large star destroyers, it is a real rush as you try your hand to stop the empire.
And imo that sentence sounds a little... umm... wierd?

Edit: Whoops, didn't notice at first:

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Still if your looking for a good action packed game, look no further than this one.

Edit2: Okay, more coming:

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How about that awesome battle of Endor, you know the one if you are a Star Wars fan.
And anyways I'd replace it with:

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How about that awesome battle of Endor? You know the one if you are a Star Wars fan.
And following:

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Well now, you can relieve that classic battle in this title where you take on the role of a x-wing pilot during that particular battle from that perspective.
And in the last sentence I'd add "," between "...in this title, where you..."

I'd also replace:

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Story wise if you know about the story from Return of the Jedi you know what's going on, the rebel alliance has warped into the planetary system of Endor. Because that is where the Empire is building their second death star at the moment.
with:

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Story wise if you know about the story from Return of the Jedi you know what's going on: the rebel alliance has warped into the planetary system of Endor, because that is where the Empire is building their second Death Star at the moment.

Edit3: Edit4: Inappropriate line and I wish to apologize...

DeathDude

Posted 03 July 2006 - 11:07 PM

Fixed. :D

Fruit Pie Jones

Posted 03 July 2006 - 08:04 PM

The "announcement" (is that what the blurb on the main page is called?) for Trilby's Notes says "more dreadful then ever."  That should be "...than ever," of course.

A. J. Raffles

Posted 25 June 2006 - 10:31 PM

Talking of typos, there's also quite a lot of typos in the AA review. And the announcement has "emmersed" instead of "immersed"...:D

Edit: Fixed.

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